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02 September 2013 @ 04:05 pm
This is my first story so bear with me as writing well is NOT one of my strengths I would appreciate reviews on this.
What if Jim Shannon had a little brother and how would that have affected the story if Ben had existed?

IT ALL STARTS IN PAIN

2129

Shannon apartment

Jim had just finished the police academy at age 20 and was now dating Elisabeth who was working at the state hospital in Chicago, Jim´s father Richard had not been a good father always drinking and beating up on both his sons and their mother when Jim started the academy Richard moved over all his frustration unto Ben their mother Jane tried her best but could not stand up to Richard and Ben always tried to stand up to his father to protect his mother the same as Jim usually did before he went off to the academy but at age 10 being much smaller than his father and only made Richard beat him even worse.

Since Richard had gotten fired years earlier and rather spent his days drinking while Jane had to work double shifts to support her remaining son.

Jane came home coughing again the week before she noticed she had been coughing up blood but hadn't gone to the hospital as they needed the money,

Richard sat on the couch watching TV and drinking as usual she could hear some music being played from Ben's room all of a sudden she was overcome with another coughing fit that made her fall down

Richard had not heard her come in as he dropped the bottle he was merrily emptying it's contents pouring out on the floor. "Look what you made me do woman…now STOP THAT DAMN NOISE!"

He got up and walked unsteadily up to her Jane was still coughing heavily blood coming through her mouth, Richard kicked her in the stomach ,She was always holding him back AND those two brats of hers. "I SAID STOP THAT DAMN NOISE!"

Ben was playing a game on his computer pad when he heard his father yelling , He ran out of his room only to see his mother lying on the floor and his father kicking her he had always hated that man , He ran in front of him putting himself in between Richard and Jane.

"YOU LEAVE HER ALONE" he yelled he did not have to wait long before the first fist came flying his way.

Richard kept beating on Ben, The little shit dared to take tone with him. "I'LL TEACH YOU TO RESPECT ME YOU LITTLE PUNK" he practically screamed as he continued to punch him the boy tried to fight back but it was useless as Richard was much bigger and stronger Richard simply threw Ben against the door after which he even kicked him in the chest for good measure.

Richard heard some noise in the apartment complex apparently some nosy neighbors had heard him he grabbed his jacket and went out the door leaving both his wife and son lying lifeless on the floor.

Chicago Mercy hospital

Elisabeth was working late that night and was talking to the desk nurse when the ambulance personnel brought in two stretchers a woman and a young boy both looked clearly beaten,

"What have we here?" she asked with all the calm she had learned at medical school.

"Possible domestic violence" the personnel answered.

When Elisabeth heard them announce them as Jane and Ben Shannon her heart practically stopped Jim had told her about his family and she had even met both Ben and Jane a couple of times so she knew them both.

Elisabeth and another doctor immediately took Ben to the OR and a couple more took away Jane the Ambulance personnel said her condition was critical "We scanned her in the ambulance it looks like pulmo replasia" one of them said.

Chicago PD 23rd precinct

Jim was still doing some paper work when the desk sergeant told him that his mother and brother had been taken to the hospital he didn't even wait for permission as he flew of his desk and out of the building and took the first bus to Mercy hospital where his fiancée worked as well .

Well that's the first chapter I apologize if my writing is a little "jumpy" I have never written a story like this before so give a guy a break!
 
 
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Current Mood: anxiousanxious
Current Music: Platoon soundtrack
 
 
02 September 2013 @ 03:44 pm
This is my first story so bear with me as writing well is NOT one of my strengths I would appreciate reviews on this.

2129

Shannon apartment

Jim had just finished the police academy at age 20 and was now dating Elisabeth who was working at the state hospital in Chicago, Jim´s father Richard had not been a good father always drinking and beating up on both his sons and their mother when Jim started the academy Richard moved over all his frustration unto Ben their mother Jane tried her best but could not stand up to Richard and Ben always tried to stand up to his father to protect his mother the same as Jim usually did before he went off to the academy but at age 10 being much smaller than his father and only made Richard beat him even worse.

Since Richard had gotten fired years earlier and rather spent his days drinking while Jane had to work double shifts to support her remaining son.

Jane came home coughing again the week before she noticed she had been coughing up blood but hadn't gone to the hospital as they needed the money,

Richard sat on the couch watching TV and drinking as usual she could hear some music being played from Ben's room all of a sudden she was overcome with another coughing fit that made her fall down

Richard had not heard her come in as he dropped the bottle he was merrily emptying it's contents pouring out on the floor. "Look what you made me do woman…now STOP THAT DAMN NOISE!"

He got up and walked unsteadily up to her Jane was still coughing heavily blood coming through her mouth, Richard kicked her in the stomach ,She was always holding him back AND those two brats of hers. "I SAID STOP THAT DAMN NOISE!"

Ben was playing a game on his computer pad when he heard his father yelling , He ran out of his room only to see his mother lying on the floor and his father kicking her he had always hated that man , He ran in front of him putting himself in between Richard and Jane.

"YOU LEAVE HER ALONE" he yelled he did not have to wait long before the first fist came flying his way.

Richard kept beating on Ben, The little shit dared to take tone with him. "I'LL TEACH YOU TO RESPECT ME YOU LITTLE PUNK" he practically screamed as he continued to punch him the boy tried to fight back but it was useless as Richard was much bigger and stronger Richard simply threw Ben against the door after which he even kicked him in the chest for good measure.

Richard heard some noise in the apartment complex apparently some nosy neighbors had heard him he grabbed his jacket and went out the door leaving both his wife and son lying lifeless on the floor.

Chicago Mercy hospital

Elisabeth was working late that night and was talking to the desk nurse when the ambulance personnel brought in two stretchers a woman and a young boy both looked clearly beaten,

"What have we here?" she asked with all the calm she had learned at medical school.

"Possible domestic violence" the personnel answered.

When Elisabeth heard them announce them as Jane and Ben Shannon her heart practically stopped Jim had told her about his family and she had even met both Ben and Jane a couple of times so she knew them both.

Elisabeth and another doctor immediately took Ben to the OR and a couple more took away Jane the Ambulance personnel said her condition was critical "We scanned her in the ambulance it looks like pulmo replasia" one of them said.

Chicago PD 23rd precinct

Jim was still doing some paper work when the desk sergeant told him that his mother and brother had been taken to the hospital he didn't even wait for permission as he flew of his desk and out of the building and took the first bus to Mercy hospital where his fiancée worked as well .

Well that's the first chapter I apologize if my writing is a little "jumpy" I have never written a story like this before so give a guy a break!
 
 
Current Location: Sweden,
Current Mood: Imaginative
Current Music: Platoon soundtrack
 
 
16 August 2013 @ 03:31 pm
Title: A Reluctant Elf
Character/Pairing: Wash/Taylor
Word Count: ~4684
Genre: Romance, General Fluff
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Alicia traps Nathaniel into something he really doesn’t want to do. Fluff ensues.
Author’s Note: I was bumped by one of my readers on FF.net, so I thought I’d try to put together a little one-shot (which of course ended up being less-than-little). For some inexplicable reason – maybe I’m just tired of summer and heat – this little Christmas/wintertime fic popped into my head. Just a bit of fun on a summer day and a bit of Christmas in August. NOT smut, just fluff. : )
This is set in the context of my other stories, pre-series, around 2146, around the Seventh Pilgrimage.

Disclaimer is the same as always – don’t own them, just borrowing, no profit here.
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Current Mood: Oddly Christmasy
 
 
08 August 2013 @ 04:32 pm
Originally posted by jemmalynette at thick as thieves chapters 31-35
Title: Thick as Thieves (31-35/35)
Warnings: some violence.
Characters: Lucas Taylor, Michael Taylor (OC), Nathaniel Taylor, Skye Tate, Alicia Washington, Mira, Boylan, the Shannon family
Summary: This is an AU story about Lucas having a twin brother. Instead of rebelling like Lucas, Michael – his brother – remains loyal to their father. This fic explores their relationship and what would have happened in the series had Michael existed.
These Chapters: The finale.
*Word Count is roughly about 3000 words per chapter
 
 
03 July 2013 @ 11:14 pm
Originally posted by jemmalynette at Thick as Thieves chapter 27-30
Title: Thick as Thieves (27-30/?)
Warnings: some violence.
Characters: Lucas Taylor, Michael Taylor (OC), Nathaniel Taylor, Skye Tate, Alicia Washington, Mira, Boylan, the Shannon family
Summary: This is an AU story about Lucas having a twin brother. Instead of rebelling like Lucas, Michael – his brother – remains loyal to their father. This fic explores their relationship and what would have happened in the series had Michael existed.
These Chapters: focus on the finale!

Chapter 27

Chapter 28

Chapter 29

Chapter 30
 
 
11 June 2013 @ 04:17 pm
Title: The Wayback Machine
Character/Pairing: Wash/Taylor, Elisabeth/Jim, Mira/Guz, Carter/Skye, Others
Word Count: ~6860 this chapter
Genre: Romance, Drama, Action, Angst
Rating: PG-13
Summary: They’d all but forgotten about the crates of artifacts from other times in history, but then they stumble upon something that reminds them that while they’re alone right now, that doesn’t mean they’ll definitely stay that way forever.
Author’s Note: Set in the context of my other stories. The relationships are all established, the Sixers are re-integrated into the colony, and the Phoenix Group and Lucas are long gone. I just realized that I’ve never really ventured down the road related to the crate from the last episode.

SO sorry for the delay in posting this – my muse has flown the coop, or, more specifically, is more focused on the piece of original fiction that I’m working on right now! This is long, though, so at least there’s that!

Disclaimer is as usual – no profit, not mine, just borrowing.

Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part Four

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22 May 2013 @ 07:01 am
Title: The Wayback Machine
Character/Pairing: Wash/Taylor, Elisabeth/Jim, Mira/Guz, Carter/Skye, Others
Word Count: ~4640 this chapter
Genre: Romance, Drama, Action, Angst
Rating: PG-13
Summary: They’d all but forgotten about the crates of artifacts from other times in history, but then they stumble upon something that reminds them that while they’re alone right now, that doesn’t mean they’ll definitely stay that way forever.
Author’s Note: Set in the context of my other stories. The relationships are all established, the Sixers are re-integrated into the colony, and the Phoenix Group and Lucas are long gone. I just realized that I’ve never really ventured down the road related to the crate from the last episode.

There will be one more after this – this one has been a fun little ride for me!

Disclaimer is as usual – no profit, not mine, just borrowing.

Part One
Part Two
Part Three

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16 May 2013 @ 12:00 pm
Title: The Wayback Machine
Character/Pairing: Wash/Taylor, Elisabeth/Jim, Mira/Guz, Carter/Skye, Others
Word Count: ~5390 this chapter
Genre: Romance, Drama, Action, Angst…
Rating: PG-13
Summary: They’d all but forgotten about the crates of artifacts from other times in history, but then they stumble upon something that reminds them that while they’re alone right now, that doesn’t mean they’ll definitely stay that way forever.
Author’s Note: Set in the context of my other stories. The relationships are all established, the Sixers are re-integrated into the colony, and the Phoenix Group and Lucas are long gone. I just realized that I’ve never really ventured down the road related to the crate from the last episode.

Disclaimer is as usual – no profit, not mine, just borrowing.

Part One
Part Two

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10 May 2013 @ 09:25 pm
Originally posted by jemmalynette at Thick as Thieves chapter 25 and 26
Title: Thick as Thieves (25+26/?)
Warnings: some violence.
Characters: Lucas Taylor, Michael Taylor (OC), Nathaniel Taylor, Skye Tate, Alicia Washington, Mira, Boylan, the Shannon family
Summary: This is an AU story about Lucas having a twin brother. Instead of rebelling like Lucas, Michael – his brother – remains loyal to their father. This fic explores their relationship and what would have happened in the series had Michael existed.
These chapters: Michael and the other colonists struggle with the Phoenix Group invasion...

chapter 25

chapter 26
 
 
10 May 2013 @ 06:27 am
Title: The Wayback Machine
Character/Pairing: Wash/Taylor, Elisabeth/Jim, Mira/Guz, Carter/Skye, Others
Word Count: ~6500 for this chapter
Genre: Romance, Drama, Action, Angst…
Rating: PG-13
Summary: They’d all but forgotten about the crates of artifacts from other times in history, but then they stumble upon something that reminds them that while they’re alone right now, that doesn’t mean they’ll definitely stay that way forever.
Author’s Note: Set in the context of my other stories. The relationships are all established, the Sixers are re-integrated into the colony, and the Phoenix Group and Lucas are long gone. I just realized that I’ve never really ventured down the road related to the crate from the last episode.

This is pretty transitional, but it felt necessary. : ) It’s also really, really long for one of my chapters, but I had fun with it. More to come…

Disclaimer is as usual – no profit, not mine, just borrowing.

Part One

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